What Is a Great Story?

A few weeks ago, Cate had a great post about readers reviewing books that clearly weren’t meant for them. The review she quoted contained, among other things, a wildly misunderstood quote from the movie As Good as It Gets. It goes like this: “Some of us have great stories, pretty stories that take place at lakes with boats and friends and noodle salad.”

The quoted reviewer thought this quote was actually a reference to a particular kind of “great” literature. It isn’t. It’s a quote about how some people have easy lives.  Contrast that with this quote from Chang-rae Lee that is explicitly about writing fiction:

All literature is a record and celebration of trouble. Stories naturally want to explore what didn’t go right. Poor choices. Wrong ideas. Wrong emotions. We’re fascinated by those things. What I try to tell my students is that they often want to celebrate life and in that mode of celebration forget that it’s very hard to celebrate life as in a party in literature. And the true celebration of life – in fiction, which is not like life at all – is about identifying those moments when everything has gone wrong.

I love what he says there because it so gets to the heart of what really great literature is. Really great literature celebrates struggle, not ease. Easy lives don’t need celebration. They are nice to live, or at least they can be, but they don’t teach us anything about what it means to be human. At least, not without juxtaposing them with less-easy lives.

All great stories, whether they end happily or not, are about struggle. This is something I teach in my introductory writing course: “Someone wants something, but…” The “but” is crucial. That’s the story. I have had students turn in stories that go, “Someone wants something and then they get it.” These are not interesting stories. They are happy. They may contain lakes (though I’ve never had a student write about pasta salad), and they are pretty. Some people even write stories like this that are then, somehow, published.

These are not great stories. Great stories aren’t about the right thing happening. They are about the wrong thing happening and then what do you do? We learn from losing, not from winning.

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The Elephant Reviews: A Hologram for the King

Dave Eggers is literary royalty right now. He’s behind McSweeney’s and all the associated publications. He’s had a number of highly-touted books himself. Sometimes, I’ve understood the hype and sometimes I haven’t. It may just be that I’ve read stuff at the wrong times. I don’t know.

When I put A Hologram for the King on my spring book queue, it was almost as an afterthought. I’d read some articles about the book and it  seemed interesting and I felt it was time to give Eggers another shot. I checked it out from the library and it sat around for a while. I renewed it multiple times before I finally picked it up.

It’s brilliant.

A Hologram for the King is a classic “nothing happens” novel. I mean it nothing happens. Alan, the main character, is in Saudi Arabia waiting for the king to arrive so he can give a presentation. The king isn’t punctual, so he really has to wait. That’s pretty much it.

Of course, in the interim, Eggers gives us a fascinating exploration of character. Rarely, in literature, have I understood the psychology of a character the way I understand Alan Clay. The book is ostensibly in third person, but it feels like a first person text. It’s Alan’s voice I hear in my head, not a faceless narrator, and we never leave Alan. I really can’t stop thinking about it as a first person text and correspondingly, it has me thinking of another first person novel in which nothing happens: The Sun Also Rises.

It is, I suppose, possible that I am making this connection only because I am currently teaching (and thus rereading) The Sun Also Rises,  but I don’t think so. In both novels, we are given a man adrift. He is made for a world that is not this world and struggles to cope. Eggers, whose writing I have often found to be very ornate, even channels his inner Hemingway with regard to prose. Consider the following passage:

He’d been in the sun too long and was grateful for the dark, for the cool, for the manmade ugly. But when the heavy door to his room punctuated the end of the day, he felt trapped and alone. There was no bar in the hotel, no diversion that would satisfy his needs, whatever they were. It was just past six o’clock and there was nothing to do.

I feel like that could almost be lifted out of the life of Jake Barnes, 20 years later. The same dissatisfaction with no idea what to do about it. The same lostness.

A Hologram for the King is all about wanting to be needed. To be essential to someone. Nearly everyone has experienced a moment of irrelevance and we have experienced the terror that comes with that. Dave Eggers has written a fantastic exploration of that feeling. You should go read it.

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Go back to your noodle salad, please.

I want to talk about audience and purpose.

If you have attended public schools in the last decade, or taught in them, you’re probably groaning. “Audience and purpose” has become a sort of buzzphrase, and a tiring one one at that. But there’s a reason for its inclusion in the curriculum, and for encouraging young writers to think about audience and purpose before they ever put a word on the page.

After I finish a novel, I visit its Amazon reviews. I’m not sure why I do this, as the reviews are often infuriating, but I’m always interested in how other people’s perceptions of a novel sync up (or don’t) with mine. Last night I finished Amanda Coplin’s The Orchardist, a beautiful and sweeping tale of the late 19th and early 20th century American West. It’s a bleak account of love and grief, quiet in its prose but thundering in its significance. It reminded me quite a bit of East of Eden, partly due to the setting, but also the breadth of human experience contained within.

Yet, when I wandered over to Amazon, I found quite a few reviewers who were displeased with the novel. They found it “truly depressing,” and “have you ever read a novel with no quotation marks?” One reviewer was unhappy to discover that The Orchardist is literary fiction as well as historical. Another found it so disturbing that she could not get it out of her mind, and deleted it from her Kindle in hopes of banishing her thoughts of it. (A thumbs up if I’ve ever heard one.) “Boring.” “No plot.” “You hear too much about what the characters are thinking.” And finally, this little gem:

Thankfully, I have made the right choice to stop reading and regret that I have wasted quite a bit of my time with this dreary piece of someone’s dark and unhappy mind. Like Melvin Udall says in “As Good As It Gets”, “Some of us have great stories, pretty stories that take place at lakes with boats and friends and noodle salad.” Please, go find one of those stories and leave “The Orchardist” under a tree.

Why, yes, if that is what you are looking for in literature, pretty stories about boats and friends and noodle salad, please go back to your pillow-stuffing novels. I find it agonizing when folks read a book that they are clearly not the audience for, only to (predictably) dislike it, and blast it online. I am not a fan of Harlequin Romances, therefore I do not read them. I do not feel compelled to drag down the cumulative review score of The Italian’s Inexperienced Mistress. I am not the intended audience, and my review would be most unhelpful.

Like any book describing the human condition, The Orchardist has its moments of sweetness, light, hope. But life is not all boats and friends and noodle salad; if yours has been that way, you are in a distinct minority. There is nothing wrong with wanting your reading material happy, and free of realism, but then, you are not the intended audience of thoughtful literary novels. That doesn’t make them boring, or bad (some are, true of any genre), but simply not the books for you.

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My Daughter Is a Reader

As a teacher, I see the entire gamut of ability. I have had students who already read at a college level and others who are below a third grade reading level. The job is such that you do what you can with both. And the more I teach, the more clear it is to me that parenting really matters.

The low readers don’t do any of the things you or I do when we read. They don’t predict. They don’t imagine. They don’t ask questions. There was a story in our local paper not long ago about children coming to kindergarten and not knowing how to open a book. Cate wrote about that recently and I don’t feel the need to go back over it.

Tonight, I was reading a Winnie-the-Pooh book to Simone and I realized that she was already doing most all of the things I try to teach kids to do. Without prompting she told me what she thought was going to happen (in response to a character disappearing – “I think he is just playing hide-and-seek and has a really good spot”). She asked questions about the things she didn’t understand. She took the text beyond the book and applied it to herself (it was about dreams).

That’s reading. Of course, she doesn’t recognize more than a few words on the page and she isn’t fully comfortable with the alphabet, but in a sense she knows how to read. The mechanics she’ll get. That’s just memorization. But she already thinks like a reader. She’s not even four yet and she already has so many advantages. I’m glad, of course, that she’s a reader. That she’ll almost certainly be a reader forever, but then there are the kids who will never be readers. I’m really sad for them.

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Cate’s April 2013 Book Log

I spent most of April plodding through a behemoth. It wasn’t entirely the book’s fault; our schedule and children plotted against me.

1. A Few Words in the Mother Tongue by Irena Klepfisz (4.5/5). Beautiful, beautiful poetry. Now I need to read Klepfisz’s entire catalogue.

2. Winter’s Tale by Mark Helprin (3.5/5). What a disappointment! For the first 300 pages or so, I was riveted, both by the fantastical tale of old New York, and the uniquely gorgeous descriptions. “White as a cut in new glass” is one that persists in my mind. I kept thinking, “This is one of the best books I’ve ever read.” Sadly, it is not; after those first few hundred pages, the story became fractured and increasingly over-the-top, and the end read like Helprin got tired of writing and decided to just wrap things up. It’s still on my bookshelf thanks to the pull of those first 300 pages, but I’ll probably never read it from cover to cover again.

3. Never Let Me Go by Kazuo Ishiguro (5/5). Now, this is one of the best books I’ve ever read. Quiet and intense, a dark knowledge builds as you read. I could hardly put it down. It defines haunting literature. I already want to read it again.

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Jason’s April Book Log

This was a very strange reading month as I ended up re-reading three books. However, the two books I read for the first time were fantastic and I won’t be surprised if they show up on my end of the year list. I still have three books to go on my spring queue, and I’m hoping to get through it. It certainly helps that I’ve submitted my National Board portfolio and thus suddenly have a great deal less work to do.

1. Mr. Fox by Helen Oyeyemi (5/5) - I spent most of my time reading this book unable to decide what I thought. Through the first 50 pages, I thought it felt like one of the best books I’d ever read. Then, for a long time, it felt like the kind of postmodernist pretense I despise. Then, I don’t know, somewhere toward the end, everything flowed together and a very fractured, confusing narrative assembled itself into a really wonderful exploration of the imagination and its consequences if carried to a far extreme. I checked this out from the library, but I’m probably going to have to buy a copy as this screams for rereading.

2. A Midsummer Night’s Dream by William Shakespeare (4.5/5) - I’ve read a lot of Shakespeare, but there are also some glaring holes. There’s just so much. I hadn’t read this one in ages, but it was nice to re-read/teach it. I’ve been reading a lot of heavy stuff lately and something light was certainly in order. It’s not perfect, though. There’s an awful lot of pointless after the third act.

3. Cloud Atlas by David Mitchell (5/5) - I had been meaning to read this book for ages. Even before it was an apparently mediocre film. I’m glad I did. It’s one of the best things I’ve ever read. The premise is so ripe for failure. It could come off as fractured and pointless. But it doesn’t. It takes you a lot of different places and at times Mitchell even sends a message through the fourth wall. It’s bleak, but leaves enough hope that I almost cried when I finished it. And it’s all in the structure. Six stories, split into pieces and very loosely connected. But somehow, this is one book about what it means to be human.

4. A Book of Birds by Amy Tudor (5/5) - Sometimes, you get lucky. Seven years ago, when I was finishing up graduate school, I took a writing workshop. In it, I read some of the most beautiful poetry I had ever come across. It was written by Amy Tudor, and eventually it ended up in this wonderful collection. This month, I pulled her book off the shelf to look for something and decided to just revisit the whole collection. What I like best about her poetry is how solidly it is grounded in the world. I see the places she comes from and it becomes so easy to let her take me wherever she wants.

5. When Kids Can’t Read by Kylene Beers (4/5) - I read this once upon a time in graduate school and I looked back through it this month as preparation for the National Board test I have coming up. It’s filled with all manner of great stuff, much of which I had forgotten and which is already being used in my classroom. If it has a flaw, it is that her students feel a bit cherry-picked at times. Still, there is much more to like here than to dislike.

Spring Book Queue:

Open City by Teju Cole
Mr. Fox by Helen Oyeyemi
The Song of Achilles by Madeline Miller
Swamplandia by Karen Russell
Pure by Andrew Miller
Salvage the Bones by Jesmyn Ward
Cloud Atlas by David Mitchell
The Round House by Louise Erdich
Dear Life by Alice Munro
A Hologram for the King by Dave Eggers

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I Don’t Wanna Think about Books

My dreams aren’t very wild. But in my wildest, I teach in at a university and write books for which people then pay me at least nominal sums.

I’m working on the publishing thing and there are a variety of reasons I’m not pursuing a more advanced degree (hint: they are all economic). But this year, I got at least a little taste of that life in teaching my AP literature class.

AP lit isn’t a college course. We meet everyday. It lasts two semesters. They are, you know, high school students. But I do grind some college level work out of them and we do have college level discussions. And let me tell you something, it’s exhausting. I have loved teaching the class, but bringing those kids along has been one of the most challenging things I’ve ever done. They’re coming down the homestretch now, the AP test is just two weeks away, and we’re all tired.

I think that is why I haven’t had a lot to say here or on my blog lately. The voice I use on blogs is very, very close to my teacher voice. But my teacher voice is kind of a show and I am an introvert. So, at the end of every school year, but especially this one, my teacher voice gets tired.

I don’t wanna talk about books right now. I wanna read. I wanna write some of my own stuff. But I don’t wanna talk about it.

In a week or two or four, I’ll wake up and suddenly have a lot to say again. But I don’t have a lot to say right now. I’m reading a lot of stuff and I like everything I’m reading. I’m trying an experiment with one of my classes and it’s going well and I’ll probably write about that when it’s done because it concerns books and reading. I just submitted my National Board portfolio and don’t have to devote any more creative energy to that.

Which is good because I don’t have very damn much creative energy left right now.

You’ll still here from me over the next few weeks. I won’t vanish, but I’m not going to have that voice in me, so it might be a little different for a while.

Go read a book.

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Weekend Links

Yes, I know, the links are inconstant. But at least we still knock on the door ever now and again.

As you are no doubt aware, Roger Ebert died recently. Here’s a lovely essay from him about books. He sure was awesome.

Mark Twain has some advice for girls.

This is related to the post I wrote this week, but is more about how authorship is being devalued. I’ll probably write something on it soon, but in the meantime, you should read the article because it’s very good.

I haven’t read any Meg Wolitzer. This summer, that’s going to change because she seems to be awesome.

GQ gave a list of books men should read. Guess what? They’re almost all by men. Surprise (not). Flavorwire corrects them.

And finally, a flowchart explaining, well, everything that needs to be explained.

 

 

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Return of the Little Bookstore

I’ve been reading a lot lately about the future of publishing and bookselling, and so I’m probably going to be writing about those topics semi-frequently for a while. Something I’ve been putting off for a while, though, is a discussion of the future of bookstores.

Borders, you almost certainly know, is dead.

Barnes & Noble seems to be dying (the only people who’ll tell you otherwise work for the company).

Amazon is responsible. After all, the whole point of Barnes & Noble and Borders was their hugeness. They had everything, or as close to everything as you could get under one roof.  Of course, Amazon beats that with a stick. And it’s cheaper!

But there’s another player in this: the independent bookstore. Here in Louisville, we have an awesome independent store called Carmichael’s they have two locations and both are great. I love shopping there (and I don’t seem to be alone as they are doing well according to all reports I’ve heard). I love shopping there because, though the stores are both small, they are wonderfully curated. I’m not wading through a see of Jane Austen rewrites trying to find a novel with real value. Practically all the books on their shelves have value. It isn’t overwhelming, it’s comforting.

I’ve seen it mused in multiple places that the future may be one of Amazon and indies. Amazon will dominate because it has everything and it’s cheap. Indies will remain as long as they carefully curate their stock to cater to those of us who care about books.

As a reader, I’m okay with that. I know, in the long run, that it’s better for publishers to have B&N. But I think it’s better for literature if stores like Carmichael’s continue to exist. Stores that pay attention to local writing and poetry and that don’t stock a ton of cookie-cutter pulp.

This is a world I can read in.

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Cate’s March 2013 Book Log

1. Beautiful in the Mouth: Poems by Keetje Kuipers (4.5/5). I love browsing our local bookstore for poetry titles. This was one I found there and later requested from the library. Kuipers has a very haunting poetic voice. “Remembering Our Last Meal in New York” is especially fabulous, to the degree of me photocopying it and placing it in the pocket of my journal.

2. Life Among the Savages by Shirley Jackson (5/5). Aside from “The Lottery,” which I read in middle school and adored, I don’t think I’d ever really read much Shirley Jackson before. So I was surprised and thrilled by Life Among the Savages, which is an absolutely hilarious and honest account of domestic life.

3. Raising Demons by Shirley Jackson (4.5/5). Raising Demons is the sequel to Life Among the Savages, and not quite as funny, but wonderful all the same. She truly brings to life the simultaneous exasperation and joy of having small children at home.

4. Skin: Talking About Sex, Class And Literature by Dorothy Allison (3.5/5). A friend sent me this book and as I’m always pumped for feminist literature, I dove into it right away. I enjoyed the read, and Allison did have some crucial insights re: feminism and class, but after a while the essays dwindled into navel-gazing and I admit, I lost interest.

5. In the Wilderness: Coming of Age in Unknown Country by Kim Barnes (5/5). I read this book several years ago and recently picked it up again. It’s one of my favorite memoirs, thanks to Barnes’ clean, honest prose. I really appreciate memoirs that tackle big concepts without necessarily being about big events.

6. What We Talk About When We Talk About Anne Frank by Nathan Englander (3.5/5). The biggest reading disappointment I’ve had in a while. The title story is amazing. During the rest I was falling asleep. Meh. I truly don’t understand what all the fuss is about.

7. City of Rivers by Zubair Ahmed (4/5). Solidly good poetry. It reads like a dream.

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